The main feedback that I received through the peer editing process was aimed towards quoting my sources and adding quotes. I didn’t have any going into the peer editing groups so I intend to go through others projects and quote them and their project they did. I also plan to add quotes from Armstrong’s text and relate them to my opinions and my views on beauty. Another thing I plan on doing is adding images from Livs project and from Erik’s project. I think if I add more images to support my claims and future quotes, it will make my paper stronger. I think my biggest challenge would be to add quotes that will fit in with my type of writing for this protect. The reason being is my essay is based off of my opinions and what I find to be beautiful along with what my classmates view as beautiful. If I’m not able to resolve this challenge on my own I plan on reaching out to the people who I am referencing and ask them for their help with adding their voice into my text. I also could ask someone on my floor for assistance. Not only do I have those resources, I also have my SASC tutor who can help me find my wording and if it comes down to I would reach out to you for help.
I hope that you find that as you revisit the essays with a renewed sense of purpose, new quotes strike you as useful and/or thought provoking. Please never hesitate to reach out. I’m here to help. 2/3 (late)